Blood Money: A Heist Gone Horribly Wrong

Featuring Storybag
Slasher, Heist
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The old bank on the corner of Fourth and Main stood tall, its crumbling façade a shadow of its former glory. It had been years since anyone dared to rob it, but a group of desperate criminals saw it as their golden opportunity. George, the mastermind behind the heist, had a plan that danced on the knife's edge of genius and madness.

"Listen up, everyone!" George shouted, addressing his crew in an abandoned warehouse several blocks from the bank. It was dimly lit, the air thick with tension and anticipation. The room was cluttered with blueprints, old bank statements, and a map of the vault’s layout. His crew consisted of three other members: a tech whiz named Lisa, the muscle named Frank, and a jittery lookout named Tom.

"This bank hasn’t been renovated since the seventies. The security system is outdated, and the staff is minimal during the night shift. We go in, grab the cash, and get out. Simple as pie!" George’s eyes sparkled with excitement.

Lisa adjusted her glasses, her face illuminated by the dim light of a battery-powered lamp. "What about the security guards? I heard they keep two on duty at night."

"We’ll handle them. We can slip in through the service entrance, which is always left unguarded. Once we’re inside, I’ll disable the alarms, and we’ll be in and out in under ten minutes," George explained, his confidence infectious.

Frank, the brawny one, cracked his knuckles and smirked. "Ten minutes? That’s too easy. I like a challenge."

Tom, who paced nervously, chimed in. "What if things go south? What if someone sees us?"

George turned to him, his expression hardening. "If we get caught, we’re done. We need to keep our heads cool and stick to the plan."

As the night of the heist approached, Tom’s anxiety grew. He had a bad feeling in his gut but couldn’t back out now. They had planned this for weeks, and he was in too deep. The heist was set for midnight.

On the fateful night, the crew gathered outside the bank, the moon barely peeking through the clouds. The street was eerily quiet, the only sound being the rustling leaves in the autumn breeze. George led them to the service entrance, and with a quick glance, he confirmed that the coast was clear.

Once inside, the dank smell of old paper and dust filled their nostrils. George pulled out a small toolkit and quickly got to work disabling the alarm while Lisa set up her laptop to override any remaining security measures. Frank stood guard, his muscles tensed, ready for any unexpected visitors. Tom remained slightly behind, his heart racing with each ticking second.

"How long till we are in?" Frank whispered, his voice a low growl.

"Just a minute!" Lisa snapped back, her fingers flying over the keyboard.

Suddenly, the sound of footsteps echoed in the corridor. Tom’s eyes widened, and he rushed to the nearest corner, panic seizing him.

“Guys! We have company!” he hissed, his voice barely above a whisper.

George cursed under his breath. "Hide! Everyone, find a spot!"

They scrambled to conceal themselves, Frank ducking behind a large metal cabinet while Lisa crouched behind a desk. George quickly stashed himself behind a nearby wall, trying to steady his breath.

The footsteps grew louder, and Tom could feel his heart pounding. He edged closer to the sound, trying to peek around the corner. His stomach dropped when he saw two security guards chatting casually, their flashlights illuminating the darkness.

“Did you hear about the break-ins in the last week?” one guard said, his tone relaxed.

“Yeah, some crazy stuff. But I doubt anyone would dare hit this place. It’s too old and dingy,” the other guard replied, chuckling lightly.

Tom’s mind raced. They couldn’t stay hidden forever.

Just as he was about to signal the others, a loud crash echoed from the room where George was hiding. All eyes turned to the sound, and panic set in.

Out of nowhere, a figure cloaked in black leaped into the room, brandishing a knife that glinted menacingly in the dim light. It was a different kind of heist—this intruder wasn’t there to steal money but to spill blood.

"What the hell?!" George shouted, his heart dropping as the figure lunged toward Frank, who barely had time to react.

The blade glided through the air, and in an instant, Frank was on the ground, clutching his stomach where a dark pool of red blossomed around him. George's stomach twisted as he realized they were caught between two threats—one was the intruder, and the other, the guards who would soon be alerted by the noise.

"Run!" George shouted, his voice slicing through the chaos. He dashed toward the exit with Lisa and Tom in tow. They burst through the service door just as the screams of Frank reached their ears, echoing painfully in Tom's mind.

Outside, they sprinted down the alley, adrenaline coursing through their veins. Tom glanced back at the bank, which seemed to loom ominously behind them like a haunted house. "What about Frank? We can’t just leave him!"

"We don’t have time!" George yelled, his face pale as he realized they had a new enemy on their hands. They needed to regroup before confronting the killer again.

They found themselves in a nearby parking garage. Heavy breathing filled the air as they tried to catch their breath, Lisa frantically typing on her phone to try and call for help.

"What’s going on, George? We can’t just let him die!" Tom pleaded, his eyes wide with fear.

"We’ll go back, but we have to outsmart this guy first. We need a weapon, something to defend ourselves with!" George replied, his mind racing.

Lisa glanced around the garage, spotting a metal pipe lying against the wall. "This will have to do," she said, grabbing it and handing it to George.

The three of them shared a determined look, knowing that they had to face their fears. They had been caught in a deadly game of cat and mouse, and it was time to turn the tables. Together, they crept back toward the bank, hearts pounding and adrenaline pumping.

As they approached the service entrance, the unmistakable sound of footsteps echoed from within. They could hear the intruder taunting them, his voice a low, chilling whisper. "Come out, come out, wherever you are..."

Clenching the pipe, George led the way back inside, their eyes scanning the dimly lit room for any sign of the killer. Time seemed to slow as they stealthily made their way through the corridors, feeling like the hunted in a heart-pounding horror film.

Suddenly, Lisa spotted a shadow darting ahead. "Over there!" she whispered, but it was too late.

The figure turned, and the glint of the knife caught the fluorescent light, making Tom freeze in place. Just then, George lunged forward, swinging the pipe with all his might. The blow connected, sending the intruder staggering back, but the fight wasn’t over.

They wrestled in a flurry of chaos—knives, fists, and screams filled the air. George fought with every ounce of strength he possessed, but the killer was relentless, fueled by rage and darkness.

Finally, with a well-placed strike, George swung the pipe again, and it connected with the killer's head. The figure collapsed, the knife clattering to the floor, and the room fell silent.

Breathing heavily, they circled the body, ensuring it was truly over. "Is he... dead?" Tom gasped, still in shock.

"Let’s make sure this time it’s really over. Help me tie him up, just in case," George said, his voice steadier now.

As they secured the killer, the faint sound of sirens approached in the distance. They had a lot of explaining to do, especially about Frank's condition. They might have escaped this nightmare, but the horror of the night would linger long after their hearts settled.

Together, they took one last look at the bank, its walls now stained with the sins of the night. They had come for money but found something far darker instead—a truer test of their lives than any heist could ever represent.

Story Written By
Thadwin
Thadwin

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